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A Simple Approach

on March 30, 2017
Chapter: Danyel's Date
Characters: Danyel, Malcolm, Mike, Sylvia
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Discussion (11) ¬

  1. Viking ZX
    Viking ZX
    March 30, 2017, 03:07 | # | Reply

    Well … He earned that.

    • Paul
      Paul
      March 30, 2017, 07:23 | # | Reply

      Yes. Yes, he did.

  2. Phinn
    Phinn
    March 30, 2017, 12:57 | # | Reply

    Good goin!

  3. Frith Ra
    Frith Ra
    March 30, 2017, 14:21 | # | Reply

    Defending a lady against a cad. Bonus points for Danyel.

    Having to resort to bodily violence, that can lose one points.

    Current running tally: still positive for Danyel.

  4. Kamui
    Kamui
    March 30, 2017, 16:00 | # | Reply

    Now the thing is, I can’t really sympathise with Danyel here. Malcom’s being an ass, sure, but Danyel HAS been tormenting him and I wager half the campus for years now. Danyel isn’t suddenly a good guy just because he’s on a date and he wants to be happy.

    However, that also doesn’t mean that being malicious to him or his date is okay, and Malcom is clearly being an ass here trying to bring social standing into this and essentially being a bigot. That said, Danyel still shouldn’t be resorting to violence. That’s just a bad way to go all around.

    • Maia
      Maia
      April 4, 2017, 01:32 | # | Reply

      Yeah, if Malcom were only tormenting Danyel, it would probably be deserved. But he’s not. He’s actually only really insulting Sylvia, in a really bigoted way too, and Danyel by association. Danyel shouldn’t have punched him, but I think Malcom is still in the wrong.

  5. Hogan
    Hogan
    March 30, 2017, 17:19 | # | Reply

    Damnit Malcom! If you hadn’t brought status and bigotry into this you could have kept the high ground in this… and you HAD earned you fun on Danyel’s behalf after how he has treated you before (… though you probably did earn a lot of it from just being… you).
    Now you have brought in on yourself, and you should probably be thankful it was Danyel who threw the first punch and not Sylvia…

  6. Lurker
    Lurker
    March 31, 2017, 02:06 | # | Reply

    Ahhh, with the look on Mike’s face, I was kinda hoping for some zappo from the backo… Oh well.

  7. Nam
    Nam
    April 1, 2017, 01:40 | # | Reply

    I think this is definitely true to Danyel’s character. 😀 Can’t say I blame him, either.

  8. Arbithian
    Arbithian
    April 1, 2017, 12:43 | # | Reply

    Danyel is a prankster; and while this makes him a pest, he doesn’t actually want to see anybody hurt. Malcom on the other hand is an elitist Jerk who doesn’t care about anyone besides himself and would even likely to enjoy watch someone else get hurt, particularly if it’s someone he doesn’t like or he feels is beneath him. Danyel’s action, although understandable, is wrong; that said, Malcom had it, and likely a lot worse coming.

  9. eekee
    eekee
    January 2, 2023, 21:13 | # | Reply

    Hmm. I’m just worried about the consequences for Danyel.

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