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No More Pokes!

on May 25, 2017
Chapter: Danyel's Date - The Awkward Epilogue
Characters: Crystal, Mike
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Discussion (8) ¬

  1. Smash
    Smash
    May 25, 2017, 08:27 | # | Reply

    “Don’t poke me again!” Love it.

  2. Arbithian
    Arbithian
    May 25, 2017, 10:21 | # | Reply

    Her being honest with Mike and herself will make this much easier on both of them. In this conversation and in general.

  3. stormcloud
    stormcloud
    May 26, 2017, 12:23 | # | Reply

    Yay, adult characters behaving like adults. How refreshing! I feel like Crystal is getting much more fleshed out as a character since she and Mike broke up. I think this is cool.

    • Nam
      Nam
      May 27, 2017, 06:47 | # | Reply

      Ditto! I love these characters and their depth.

    • Daiger
      Daiger
      May 27, 2017, 17:26 | # | Reply

      It’s funny because they’re teenagers, but I agree that the breakup did help add more depth to their relationship and worldview on a whole. But then again, we hardly have scenes of Crystal post-breakup, since Mike jumped straight into Danyel’s subplot, which was due to said break-up.

      • stormcloud
        stormcloud
        May 27, 2017, 21:21 | # | Reply

        They’re barely teenagers anymore, though. They’re in college 😛 Even if they’re 18, that’s not the same as 13. But yeah, I think it’s cool that even though we haven’t seen her, her character still grows 😀

  4. Mew3
    Mew3
    May 28, 2017, 17:39 | # | Reply

    Poke him? Poke da man. Oh, Pokemon!

  5. eekee
    eekee
    January 2, 2023, 21:20 | # | Reply

    I was sure she’d be jealous. Who wouldn’t?

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