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Books by Peter Tarkulich

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Ultimatum

on November 27, 2014
Chapter: The Challenge
Characters: Francis, Praak
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Discussion (12) ¬

  1. Beregond
    Beregond
    November 27, 2014, 02:35 | # | Reply

    Anyone else notice that Francis’ ears are ragged in the same place that Praak’s have earrings? My guess is that the rings are ceremonial jewelry, and that Francis’ rings were ripped out of his ears when he abandoned demon society.

    • LongshotLink
      LongshotLink
      November 27, 2014, 17:21 | # | Reply

      Or adulthood or belonging to a ‘royal’ class.

    • Nam
      Nam
      November 28, 2014, 00:36 | # | Reply

      Good catch! I didn’t notice that one. I hope we find out more soon.

  2. Ninkybug
    Ninkybug
    November 29, 2014, 16:23 | # | Reply

    The K and R in Francis’s real name switched places.

    • Pete
      Pete
      November 29, 2014, 16:38 | # | Reply

      Gah, thank you! When I had originally written Francis’s back story, I had his name as Belkaar, but I went back and changed it to Belraak because I liked the way it sounded better. When I wrote the scripts for this story line I must have still had the original name rattling around in my brain!

      • Ninkybug
        Ninkybug
        November 30, 2014, 12:45 | # | Reply

        It’s okay, and your welcome!

      • Andy4Hire
        Andy4Hire
        November 30, 2014, 15:57 | # | Reply

        Probably just as well to keep its current form “Belraak.” Partly, it seems to fit him better, somehow. And partly, if you called him “Belkaar,” Rich Burlew or his lawyer might have some choice words for you about intellectual property and such. (I have no idea whether he’s the sort of guy who would actually do that, but someone would pick up on the Belkaar/Belkar thing sooner or later.)

        • Pete
          Pete
          November 30, 2014, 17:51 | # | Reply

          Can’t imagine he would (never met him, but he never struck me as that sort of guy). Besides, he wouldn’t have too much legal ground to stand on, considering my character doesn’t resemble his at all and I’ve got an extra “a” in it. Either way, not an issue. 🙂

          • Andy4Hire
            Andy4Hire
            November 30, 2014, 19:50 | #

            True enough, Pete, true enough. (Of course, you’ll have to put up with smart-aleck fans like me either way….)

  3. LongshotLink
    LongshotLink
    December 1, 2014, 00:37 | # | Reply

    Actually, the thing I notice most is that Francis is the taller of the two of them. That’s interesting.

  4. Sandman366
    Sandman366
    December 2, 2014, 01:56 | # | Reply

    I’m almost hoping now that Mike gets involved. I’ve no idea why since he’d probably have a seriously tough time with it, and it’d complicate the politics by a lot, but still.

  5. AsheSkyler
    AsheSkyler
    December 30, 2014, 13:30 | # | Reply

    I nominate we let the challenge come to him, and then bring out the bard students hyped up on a triple shot of Jitter Juice. =3

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